Clouds Over the Red Horizon
The” teapot” was falling apart.
Not literally—but the station looked like a teapot: bulbous modules, spindly docking arms, a crooked antenna like a snapped spout. Someone in PR probably called it charming. I called it delusional. Earth’s overconfidence, floating above a planet they still didn’t understand.
A klaxon had just stopped blaring. A small systems failure—nothing catastrophic, but enough to make the air taste like copper and raise everyone’s blood pressure. Engineers swarmed the bulkhead behind me while the observation deck vibrated faintly beneath my boots.
I pressed my fingertips to the glass. Cold. Below us, Mars stretched out in rust-colored swaths, storm systems curling like ink on water. I spotted a lonely thread of cloud drifting above the chaos.
“Philomena,” I murmured, naming her. “Still fighting, huh?”
Behind me, the tension on the station buzzed like static. The air carried the scent of ozone, warm metal, and nerves. A security officer strode past, boots clicking, badge gleaming briefly under the LED panels.
Kaia Quincy sat across the deck, a low white lounge chair holding her like a coil of wire about to snap. Her braid hung heavy down her back, casting a jagged shadow across her face. Her lips moved, just barely. Talking to herself. Or rather—to her reflection in the mirror across from her.
I didn’t need to hear the words. I’d seen her do it before. She always listened better to herself than to anyone else.
“She ready for the trial?” asked a voice behind me.
A junior aide. Reedy. Reeking of stress and cheap cologne. He tugged at his collar like it was choking him.
“Oh, she’s ready,” I said. “Question is—will the Summit be ready for her?”
The aide didn’t laugh. Just blinked and walked away, footsteps quick and uneven.
Kaia’s eyes flicked to mine. Just a second. Then she looked away again.
“You’re doing the thing again,” I said softly. “Whispering to your better half.”
She tilted her head. “I’m not sure she is the better one anymore.”
“Then tell her to share the plan.”
Kaia smirked—barely. “It’s not the plan I’m worried about. It’s what I’ll have to become to execute it.”
The Crimson Summit wasn’t a game. It was a grinder. A proving ground wrapped in politics, surveillance, and reputation.
The first trial was a shifting holographic maze—all liquid glass and mirrored corridors. It was supposed to test agility, cognition, and adaptability. What it really did was isolate competitors and make them second-guess every step.
I watched Kaia from the deck. The maze shimmered, alive with trick walls and flickering phantoms. The recycled air stung my throat. I couldn’t stop swallowing.
She moved like a wire pulled tight. Every step calculated. Every pause surgical.
A trap triggered—floor collapsing. She twisted mid-step, boots catching the edge. Fingers hooked, pulled up. Grace and adrenaline in motion. My knuckles were white against the glass.
At the maze’s center, she faced the reflection chamber—a pair of mirrored panels angled just so. The goal: align your reflection and solve the internal symmetry. In other words, understand yourself or die in doubt.
She stepped between them. Her image fractured. One Kaia looked calm. The other? Ruthless.
She raised her hands slowly. The reflections shifted.
For a moment—discord. Then, unity.
Light shattered. The maze dissolved.
Kaia stood in the silence.
That night, we sat in the cafeteria, surrounded by humming light panels and the faint stink of algae soup. Kaia hadn’t touched hers. Her spoon lay flat on the tray, catching her reflection in the dented steel.
“They own me,” she said.
I stared at her. “Who?”
“The Red Whisper,” she said, voice steady. “Debt’s real. So is the threat. They don’t want me to win.”
“How bad?”
“Half a million credits. Plus interest. They’ve got kompromat, too. If I lose, I’m theirs. If I win—”
She trailed off.
“What?” I asked.
Her voice was ice. “Then they lose leverage. And they don’t let go of what they own. Not without blood.”
The silence between us thickened. The hum of the station faded under the weight of that sentence.
“If I bow out now,” she said, eyes locked on her spoon, “they’ll take me. If I win, they’ll come for you. For anyone they think matters to me.”
I reached for her hand. She let me take it, but her grip was tight. Shaking.
“I don’t have a choice,” she whispered.
“Maybe not,” I said. “But you still get to decide who you are when the fight’s over.”
Her spoon caught her reflection again. For a moment, she stared like she was waiting for the other Kaia to answer. Then she looked away.
The final challenge: The Chamber of Equilibrium.
A glass arena suspended like a nerve above Mars. Red horizon in every direction. Kaia stood inside, wrapped in shadow and quiet. Across from her, her final opponent: a brute of a man, all scarred knuckles and square jaw. Heavy, slow, but dangerous. The kind of fighter who only needed one lucky hit.
No bell. No announcement.
He lunged.
The first blow caught Kaia in the ribs. A dull crack that echoed up into my bones. She staggered. Didn’t fall.
She struck back—elbow to his neck, followed by a jab to the knee. He grunted, but kept coming. The air inside the chamber turned humid with exertion. Every breath felt like glass.
She was faster. Smarter. But he was a wall.
Blood splattered on the floor—hers, his. The chamber became a crucible. Strategy dissolved into survival.
He slammed her into the floor. For a second, she wasn’t in the chamber—she was sixteen, cornered in an alley on Ceres, blood in her mouth and nowhere to run.
Then she moved.
She drove her knee into his stomach. He grunted. She twisted, dislocated his shoulder with a sharp crack. His grip loosened. She dropped, rolled, and came up with a kick that sent him skidding across the floor.
He stayed down.
Kaia stood over him, breathing hard. Her hands trembled. Her reflection in the glass walls stared back—bloodied, brilliant, and unforgiving.
The chamber lights dimmed.
Match won.
She didn’t return to the observation deck that night. I found her in the maintenance corridor, crouched by an open panel, sweat still glistening on her brow.
“They know,” she said before I could speak. “Got a message. No words. Just coordinates. My old apartment on Ceres Station. Where my sister still lives.”
Her voice was a rasp. Flat. Final.
“They’re warning me,” she said. “This win—it cost more than blood.”
I knelt beside her. “What are you going to do?”
She didn’t answer right away. Then:
“I think I have to go to them. Head-on.”
“Kaia—”
“I can’t keep running,” she said. “I beat their system today. That means they’ll retaliate. So I’m going to end it first.”
She caught her reflection in the panel beside us—bloodied braid, cracked lip, fire behind her eyes. For once, she didn’t speak to it. Just looked. Then turned away.
“I know what I am now,” she said. “And I know what I’m not.”
I nodded, throat tight.
“What do you need?” I asked.
She turned her head. The expression on her face was colder than the station glass—but for the first time, it wasn’t empty.
“Backup,” she said.
She exhaled slowly, steady for the first time in days. Not peace—but presence.
Outside, Mars spun silently beneath us, clouds dragging shadows across its red horizon.
Three days later, we hit them.
Ceres Station, Subsection Delta-9. Quiet. Overgrown with shadows and false echoes. Kaia moved first—silent, surgical. Two guards down before I even drew my weapon. She didn’t smile. Didn’t speak.
She made it to the heart of the Whisper’s operation—a glass-walled office tucked inside a forgotten data vault. The man inside looked up, recognition blooming into fear. She placed a thin black chip on his desk.
“Your copy,” she said. “Original’s already off-world.”
He opened his mouth. She raised a hand.
“Try to retaliate,” she said. “I’ll light you up in six systems. Bank trails, blood deals, every dirty thread you’ve spun.”
He swallowed. Hard.
“We done?” she asked.
He nodded, barely.
Kaia leaned in. “Then crawl back into your hole. Whisper quieter.”
We walked out. No alarms. No blood.
When we reached the docking ring, I turned to her.
“You did it.”
She looked out the viewport. Ceres hung behind us like a ghost.
“No,” she said. “I ended it.”
And for the first time since the Summit began, she smiled.
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